lunes, 3 de diciembre de 2012

Creative writing "Lyric"

Hope of deliverance                                            

I will always be hoping, hoping.
You will always be holding, holding
My heart in your hand. I will understand.

I will understand someday, one day.
You will understand always,
Always from now until then.

When it will be right, I don't know.
What it will be like, I don't know.
We live in hope of deliverance from the darkness that surrounds us.

Hope of deliverance, hope of deliverance.
Hope of deliverance from the darkness that surrounds us.

And I wouldn't mind knowing, knowing
That you wouldn't mind going, going along with my plan.

When it will be right, I don't know.
What it will be like, I don't know.
We live in hope of deliverance from the darkness that surrounds us.

Hope of deliverance, hope of deliverance.
Hope of deliverance from the darkness that surrounds us.

Hope of deliverance, hope of deliverance.
Hope of deliverance from the darkness that surrounds us.


More lyrics: http://www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/p/paul_mccartney/#share


My commentsLyrics, with Afro-Latinos airs.  A beautiful song, with autumn air and a dreamy melody accompanied by a letter that may have to do with ecological action of his late wife Lynda McCartney, which appears in the video. A song with a beautiful message, "the hope",something that never can be negative or sad.

Creative writing Workshop N°10

                           Limerick


There was a woman named Irene
In her eyes could see a light green
Although she seemed to have no life
her eyes were aggressive
she is Irene, the Queen

lunes, 12 de noviembre de 2012

Creative writing Workshop N°9

Play:  " Misunderstandings"

Characters:
Character 1: Cherry
Character 2: Enzo
Wonder Woman: Luz
Cop: Marco

Scene 1   (Knock, knock. Cherry opens the door)

Cherry: Enzo! You're finally here! Please, come in.
Enzo: What happened? You seem worried in your message.
Cherry: I'm dying man! I've got cancer!
Enzo: No! This is terrible. (Grabs Cherry's shoulders)
Cherry: I've got just six months left.
Enzo: You know what!  We will do anything you want to do in theses six months! Do you have any idea?
Cherry: Hmmmm... You know... I've always wanted to do drugs.
Enzo: Oh! That escalated quickly! Alright! I'll buy it for you. What do you want?
Cherry: I want to try coke. Get me some coke man! (Cherry gives Enzo some money)
Enzo: I'll buy it for you! I'll be right back.

Scene 2 

Cherry: I'm so nervous. But it doesn't matter. I have just six months left of life and I wanna try coke. (Knock, knock)


  
Scene 3   ( Enzo is wearing a back pack)

Cherry: Did you bring the coke?
Enzo: Here it is!
(Enzo drags from his backpack a bottle of coca-cola)
Enzo: So... are we getting high?
(Cherry slaps Enzo with the bottle)
Cherry: This is not coke! This is coca-cola. Are you stupid or what?!
Enzo: Calm down! Relax man! Can you think in anything else?
Cherry: I'm running out of money so you can't waste it!
Enzo: Don't worry. This time won't screw it! I won't do anything stupid.
Cherry: Well. I could smoke some pot. (Gives Enzo money) Go bring me the pot!
Enzo: As you wish!

Scene 4

Cherry: What an imbecile! At least I will smoke some pot.

Scene 5   (Knock, knock)

Cherry: You're finally here. Did you bring me the pot?
(Enzo drags a pot from his backpack)
Enzo: Here you have, a brand new pot just for you!
Cherry: Cherry stares at Enzo vary angrily)
Enzo: So... Do you like the pot?
Cherry: No! No! No! Nooooo!  Hell no! Is this some kind of joke?
Enzo I don't know man... I got nervous and...
Cherry: I don't care! I'md dying you careless bonehead!
Enzo: Ok! Ok! Name anything! Just name it! I'll bring it to you! I'll not disappoint you!
Cherry: This is all the mone I've got. You screw it and I'm broke.
Enzo: What do you want?
Cherry: Heroin. Bring me heroin and please, don't screw it up.
Enzo: I'll bring you the best heroin!
(Enzo sets off running)

Scene 6

Cherry: (Praying) God! I've got just six months left to live, I've got no money left and have a stupid friend. Please, let me try heroin.

Scene 7   (Knock, knock)

Cherry: Please, tell me you got the heroin.
Enzo: Brace yourself buddy! Meet the heroin!
(Luz enters disguised as Wonder Woman)
Cherry: (fell down to his knees) No! Why?! Why?? (covers his face with his hand while crying)
Enzo: (Taps Cherry's back) Don't worry buddy. I brought something else.
(Cops get into the room)
Cops: So you were who was trying to buy coke, pot and heroing! You will be locked down for six months you sick bastard!


viernes, 28 de septiembre de 2012

Creative Writing Workshop N° 8

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sábado, 22 de septiembre de 2012

Creative Writing Workshop N°7


The Little girl and the wolf

By James Thurber


One afternoon a big wolf waited in a dark forest for a little girl to come along carrying a basket of food to her grandmother. Finally a little girl did come along and she was carrying a basket of food. “Are you carrying that basket to your grandmother?” asked the wolf. The little girl said yes, she was. So the wolf asked her where her grandmother lived and the little girl told him and he disappeared into the wood.

-My alternative version…The little girl knew that the wolf had bad intentions. She also realized that he was a coward, so she decided  to give  to grandmother a present: the wolf's smooth skin. So, when the wolf walked through the dense forest, the little girl surprised him. The wolf was so startled that he fell to the ground unconscious. She took the opportunity and killed him, stabbing a knife in his heart. So she rip off his beautiful skin and gave it of her grandmother.

Creative Writing Workshop N° 6



A DOG STORY

Character Descriptions

Chucky

Mutt
cat










Personalities

Chucky
Chihuahua dog. Family pet, he lives in a house with a large garden. Your fun is barking at every dog, cat, bird or person passing by outside his home. His personality is that of a dog hysterical and moody, but very energetic. His world is the backyard of the house.
Mutt
Mixture Doberman with mutts. He lives on the streets, sleeping wherever he wants; he eats what he finds in dumpsters or what someone pulls. Mutt is a scary dog, by his large size.

Cat
Cat spends days and nights wandering the streets in search of fun. He has a gossipy and busybody cat.

Creative Writing Workshop N° 5

ANIMAL FARM

  Character descriptions



Main Character: Made speech and died
  • Old Major


Pigs: The smartest animals
  • Napoleon
  • Snowball
  • Squeeler
  • Other pigs
Dogs: working as police animals
  • Bluebell
  • Jessie
  • Pincher
Horses: animals more workers.
  • Boxer ( enormous beast)
  • Clover

The seven commandments

  1. Whatever goes upon two legs is an enemy
  2. Whatever goes upon four legs or has wings, is a friend
  3. No animal shall wear clothes
  4. No animal shall sleep in a bed
  5. No animal shall drink alcohol
  6. No animal  shall kill any other animal
  7. All animal are equal